2014年12月21日星期日

play a sand


play a sand
Saturday afternoon, the 3-year-old cousin comes to our house to have fun.The mother says:The weather is quite good, rather take younger brother to down stairs to have fun and conveniently insolate!I say:Good!Cousin hears to go out to have fun, happy get call, dance and stamp, happiness matchless.
I lead long the cousin's hand and take two toy spade son and a small water pail and arrive at the sand pit of small area side, the cousin sees a sand, the no time for waiting ground jumps sand ground selfish have fun, see his find joy in one's own way, also pretty lovely of, I then lift small water pail to pack to come to a pail of water.I say to the cousin:The elder brother comes to set up a fortress, not very good?The cousin orders.Hence I poured some water to arrive inside in the sand, the cousin also learned my appearance to pour water, Hua, all of waters poured out, I got a fright, he but the Luo Luo Luo keep smiling, still just aquatic fierce trample.I am helpless, re- packed a pail of water, had already then started work.The cousin sees the appearance that I have a little son animation and hustle along the going fetch of darling spade son and cover fortress together with me.
two of us' favour lived very for a while and finally covered one to be like mold presentable fortress, the cousin was happy to summon up Zhang.I still run and go home and go fetch a small toy car, the cousin arrives the fortress to the car up, have fun not as well happy.
today, I have lots of fun with cousin! After the Ju ground in rules in the composition completes, the foundation that can get hold of structure cent, but if use some methods let article of the structure seem to be more skillful, attraction the reader's eyeball, will on the structure cent in article up be added a cent.Below introduce a few kinds to let the composition conceive outline more skillful method, hope to have a help to each early high school student. 1, the constitution hang a pronunciation constitution to hang to read the best way nothing is better than in establish to ask in the beginning, in the composition beginning then ask a question for reader, the form can be to ask a sentence as well as only is a description, but usually seem to be fantastic in the affair of beginning and not agree with normal regulations, so the ability produce a question in the reader's heart and lead its interest, let it produce to expect to the continuation mental. Is a sky such as 《match seller's little girl 》 beginning cold pole, snow snow, again quickly black.(Next 88)this is a year of the last day-Lunar New Year's Eve.In this cold and black evening, a light wears a head barefoot little girl to walk down the street.This beginning relatively has an attraction, because it established a lot of questions for reader.What is the little girl a stem?Being so cold sky of is still a Lunar New Year's Eve.She why a person walk down the street, also baldheaded barefoot?The reader naturally wants to downwards read. 2, suppress a Yang method so-called suppress Yang of method, after including to suppress first Yang or first the Yang suppress behind.What this method says is be you truely want to express a certain praise or blame emotion of time, don't express in the beginning, but come out in the beginning contrary aspect performance, immediately after just started expressing the expressional aspect that you think.If the novel of gold Yong 《smile the Ao river's lake 》 depiction makes blunt teacher Yue of fox not cluster, then with the desire suppress the skill of Yang first, start Yue not the cluster describe into a Ci father good teacher of image, gave the gentleman sword that his virtuous personage takes it as a great honor the title;But arrive a behind, this Ci father make use of daughter's happiness to attain private interest, this good teacher kill oneself's disciple for selfishness.Open gentleman sword in really and completely cunning mean person, bring about Wu Lin Zhong's Xing breeze blood rain for greed.Thus too many of need not language descriptions, only front and back a contrast, the despicable its human nature exposes entirely.But 《the absolute being vulture Xia Lyu 》 description over then used the desire Yang suppresses first of skill. Suppress a Yang method actually is contrast thinking of a kind of, writing want to notice.The purpose of suppressing is a Yang, suppress of contents for the sake of betterly Yang.Finally want to express the meaning that you want to express most . 3, the misunderstanding method misunderstanding come from interpersonal or the false comprehension of the person to the thing.Misunderstanding the method is to point in the literature work, a square of the person brings about misunderstanding on another square(or a certain matter), or 2 people misunderstand each other and cause an antinomy thus and push details development and make thus the great waves of person emotion in multiple layers pass into, versatile.The so-called person is expensive to keep, text expensive song, monotonous is a composition to greatly hate, but want to let the article rise and fall to fall Dang, moving, the Qiao establishes a misunderstanding not to lose to a kind of good method. There is for example one testing a full marks composition to be called 《misunderstanding 》 , start writing me in the article because the world rain parents didn't give that get sick of I send an umbrella but make me mistaken for parents not to love me, see afterwards the note that the mother leaves just know that the parents are to want to toughen me, it makes me able to grow up better, I understand the parents' care and love to me after knowing that this is that misunderstand.This is the example that typically uses to misunderstand a method to come to hang for article constitution to read. Use this method to need to be noticed must give an account after finishing writing a misunderstanding this is misunderstanding, and need to give an account that host's Mr. knows that this is after misunderstanding of mental state reaction.

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