the color in spring


the color in spring
pass by in winter, what season is your knowing ?To!Is spring!Have again that spring what color?Let let's come and see!
you visit an expanse of white snow of that hillside melt and threw on the quilt of one bed green;You see that barn swallow on the sky be dressed in alternate swallow-tailed coat of whole body black and white from cold of the north fly to return to this warm place;You see the small bud the most delicate yellow green inside of treetop top sharp point deeply a send innocent pink;You see the small grass of that wayside send out the voice of "sand sand""sand sand" to ring and imitate Buddha is saying to the stranger:"Spring arrive and arrived in spring, do I like in spring that you like?"Stranger well understand, understand don't understand a location to nod, the small grass happily starts to sing song;You see that winter jasmine turn over the clothes of a gold Can Can in the wardrobe and wear on the body, companion's wearing spring breeze is lightly moving to dance in this beautiful place;You see that pure brook, once the ice-cubes on the body see the sun grandfathers all hide, brook elder sister"Hua""Hua" ground start to sing song;You see the animals that that hibernates all get up, the small squirrel takes off a loose fruit in the treetop, the small white rabbit with relish eats at the door delicacy of and then fresh small grass, the small cat is pursuing and arresting a rat ……
you see spring is how animate, I have already known spring is what color of, do you know?If you know, please loudly tell me!
I ask a son before going to bed every day:"Is the mother good?"
the son answer:"Good."
I ask again:"Mother where good?"
son meeting habitual the ground answer:"The mother grows good-looking."
then I fully satisfiedly tell a story for son.
a day evening, I ask so again of time, husband beside Du Rang:"Always ask so, all influence the son's esthetic sense." The fantasy type composition is to suppose a kind of scene, the author completes with the imagination of composition.For example, 《if I am to help male 》, 《 stand at what the moon top thoughts of 》, 《 Mr. Yu and the second-time meeting of Zhi Sou 》, 《 after 20 years my a day 》 etc..The characteristics of this kind of question in composition test is:The freedom is vivid, unrestrained, thought to be free from restriction, can maneuver to gallop about, soar to the skies hover.Writing this composition has to notice following what time:

a, have to be concrete but meticulous of description.Is concrete but meticulous of the description is a composition image vivid essential condition.Abstract general, there is no concrete case, impossible attraction reader.If write 《if I am help male 》 , should concentrate to write like 23 concrete cases, some classmate each one firsts are "if my benefit is male", keep on connecting is me would ever how.Being each is tenth, 35, totally wrote a segment, is all dry and hard, the contents is dishonest at, be in need of image.

two, have to have an explicit topic.The fantasy type composition has to extremely and extensively choose material world, but this not that it can thought of what write what, it is also similar to the composition of other types, have to have an explicit topic, the material chosen has to surround this topic.《If I am benefit Mr. 》 is this composition, its topic should is be like help male so suppress strong hand weak, Cheng the bad Yang is kind, choose of the material will can embody this.But some classmates after writing become to help male assiduous delve into science, acquired a national science and technology prize, this visited to leave topic.

three, go into to have to be quick.Write this composition, had better direct from condition and details commence and abandon the whole set of words.But some composition opening remarkses of classmates are too many, slowly said a lot of words of surpluses, such as while writing 《Mr. Yu and the second-time meeting of Zhi Sou 》 , what"the determined old fool can move a mountain is a literary reference", "this literary reference has deep meaning", etc., rounded a few turn sons first, then went into, garrulous, not very simple and direct.

four, have to have reality basis.Fantasy type composition expression of mostly author of ideal, the ideal is to realistically fold light, it can attain or can carry out after effort.There is a classmate that write 《if I am help male 》 , say help male call on the teacher of sick A, the treasure is 1, make the low short cabin become a big house right away, and spacious brightness, the sunlight is ample.This is the establishment in the realistic foundation of, because of constructing a house like this for teacher is become realistic.If change so:Teacher A lives in the cave, dark damp, help a male, immediately become a palace of magnificent, teacher AN is correcting a homework in the palace, this doesn't suit actual.

the contents of fantasy type composition usually is an ideal life, full of truth among them, also usually is expressing of author's intense emotion.Thus, had better write with the style of writing of glow with enthusiasm and joyful alacrity.